http://recluse-cicada.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] recluse-cicada.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kaminokusaki 2014-05-14 01:15 am (UTC)

...it wasn't half bad until the third line. You broke the rhyming scheme with fornicate and smashed it to smithereens with your additions.
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